| Scoop's |
| SCARY STORIES! |
To the Reader of these Tales: One of the best parts of a late-night
campfire is telling a scary story, especially to the Kids. Yes, who can forget
the thrill of telling the tale of the 'Hook' to a frightened son or
daughter, or even an innocent friend who happens to be by the fire? The
ultimate
effect, of course, is to have a
'Captain Hook' pirate hand at
the ready and gently caress an earlobe as the story finishes. Oh, how they
scream, especially if the Kids are supposed to sleep in a tent alone that night!
However, it may also put a damper on any Primitive Urges you might have had planned with your Sweetie-Pie for later that night, since the Kids will now be sleeping with you! But sometimes it's worth it...
The following story is edited from a column from August 1998. It is based on a true incident, sort of. For best results, have ready a mannequin's hand, or even a stuffed glove, and throw it at someone at the proper moment. You'll know when...
| The Hand |

'The Hand' by Frininzero www.frikoutdoors.com
It was seven years ago that this happened. The Circus Train was coming to town for a brief stop on its way to Milwaukee. The stopover was always a gala affair, with people buying balloons and cotton candy, clowns mingling with the crowd, and several temporary cages of wild animals put on display. On this particular night, however, the train engineer was hesitant. There were heavy winds, and a possible tornado sighting just 5 miles away. He knew he should just continue on, but up ahead was the Welcoming Committee and more than a hundred children. He radioed back for the animal crew to be ready to set up quickly and tear down just as fast. He would give the children 15 minutes--no more.
Meanwhile, the nearby campground was nearly deserted. Most of the campers were away, waiting for the Circus Train, braving the gusty winds in order to see the clowns and animals. So it was with ease that two teenagers were able to creep through the surrounding woods and find an empty tent next to a cooler full of beer and a smoldering campfire. It was too good to pass up--they could steal a few beers and quickly escape into the thick woods if anyone came back early.
The storm struck swiftly, the rain so heavy that the trainers could barely see as they herded animals back up the ramps into the train cages. The crowd was scattering, and a large flatbed truck swerved to avoid hitting an elderly man. The tires skidded on the slick road and the truck sideswiped one of the ramps, toppling a cage of giant alligators into the bed of the truck. The driver, in a panic, sped away, unaware of the cargo in the back of the truck, or that the cage door had sprung open.
The driver would not get far. The rain had washed out a section of the highway a few miles ahead, and it was there that he lost control and crashed into a ditch, unconscious. The largest of the alligators, almost 20 feet in length, longer than the truck itself when it straightened its tail, poked its snout out over the bed of the truck. The gator bared its huge teeth as it sniffed the air. It was hungry, and wind carried a faint scent of food nearby. As if smacking its lips, the giant gator hissed and then slithered off into the woods.
The teenagers had retreated to the tent, not thinking about being caught anymore. No one would come back in this storm. The beer was almost gone, and one of the boys was in the middle of a joke when he suddenly stopped. He had heard something rustling outside by the campfire.
The other boy teased him for being scared. It's just a lost dog, he said. Laughing, he opened the tent flap and went outside to chase it away. A few seconds later the screams began.
The screams seemed to echo through the tent, mixed with growls and crunching noises that sounded like bones snapping in two. The campfire outside flared briefly to life, making hideous shadows dance on the tent wall. Then there was silence, but only for a moment.
A huge shadow sniffed near the tent flap, a long low body scraping against the canvas. The boy still inside the tent held his breath, afraid to move. A huge claw reached up and tested the canvas, pushing against it. The beast, as if confused, shuffled to the back of the tent, and the boy summoned all his courage and forced himself to dash through the flaps of the tent. Almost immediately he stumbled over the shredded body of his friend, lifeless eyes staring up at the rain. The boy ran past the flickering campfire, towards the nearby lake. If he could get through the woods, he could swim to safety.
Fear made him clumsy and he fell several times. He could hear the giant creature chasing him, branches crushing under the beast's weight. Something snapped at his ankle and pain shot up through his leg. Still he ran, not bearing to look back, until he reached the lake. He threw himself in, swam as far as he could, and only then stopped to catch his breath. That was his mistake.
His heavy gasps of air must have hidden the noise as the beast slid into the lake. He must have seen the deep black eyes and the long rows of yellow fangs as it suddenly rose in front of him. He must have thrown up a hand for protection, for that was the first thing the alligator bit off. He must have thrashed about in the seaweed just under the surface, becoming entangled, unable to further defend himself. When he was found the next morning, his body had been dragged back to the campfire, and only when the Police pulled away the mass of seaweed did they discover the bloody stump of his missing hand.
The boy was buried like that, without his hand, in a cemetery not far from the campground. In time the story was forgotten, except by a few of us who still try to warn people away from a certain campsite. But we can't warn everybody, and it was only last month that another camper was found dead next to his campfire. His face was twisted with fear, and there were ugly red bruises around his neck, as if something had strangled him. Hanging from his open mouth was a single strand of wet seaweed. In the grass and dirt around the body were strange markings, and grooves dug deep in a long trail leading from the woods near the lake.
You may laugh, but there's a few of us who believe it was the boy's hand that did it. You see, the mind is a powerful thing, sometimes so powerful it can reach out from the grave, searching for something it desperately wants, something that is missing...a body, perhaps. It cannot go into the cemetery, for that is a hallowed place. So it must continue to search the only place it can, the campground. And what is it searching for? We think it needs someone the right age, the right size, a perfect fit to attach itself to. Someone like...you.
We may never know. Then again, you might find out tonight, if the hand is in a mood to...STRIKE!
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Well, telling this tale has certainly made me thirsty. You there, you with the seaweed, hand me a beer...
So...did you throw the "hand" at the right time? For my next tale, you're on your own. I'll bet you think of something...
| Rat-Tale |
The man had been in the cage for a long time. Once a day--or perhaps it was night--a thin sliver of light would break the darkness of the tunnel outside. He would cower in the corner against the stone walls as the footsteps echoed. A bowl of stew would be placed near the bars. His waste-bucket was emptied. Then the footsteps would retreat. He hated the stew and the bits of bread, but the rats had been acting bolder lately, one even chewing on his bare foot as he slept. So he would use the meager food as bait. The rats had found a way in…now they would show him the way out.
He sopped a few pieces of the bread in the stew and set them aside while he finished his meal. Then he leaned against the stone wall and waited. There was a pale splotch on the far wall of the cage, a suspicion of light from down the tunnel, as if a lantern had been left on behind the distant, heavy door. But for some reason he knew he shouldn't try to escape that way. He didn't know why, couldn't think why not, he just knew. So he waited.
The rats came out an hour later. By now he could see fairly well in the cage, and he watched their fat tails slither on the ground as they tested the air, thick whiskers over protruding teeth sniffing towards him. He tossed a scrap of bread at the first rat, the largest one.
It was larger than his hand, with eyes that seemed to glow a bright red in the dark. It moved boldly to the piece of bread and nibbled at it. Satisfied, it devoured the rest of the crumb eagerly. Other rats circled about. The man let them starve. The leader was the one he needed.
The man tossed each successive piece closer to himself. When the rat was about three feet away, it would come no closer, its thick body shifting and hopping in hesitation. The man ate the rest of the bread and went to sleep. Sometime during the night or day he sensed the rat sniffing at the corner of his mouth. He did not move, and the rat did not bite him.
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It took four more feedings for the rat to come close enough for him to catch it. It struggled and darted its yellowed teeth at his hand, but he quickly fed it a scrap of bread. Then he released it. When no more food was offered, the rat joined its followers. The army of red eyes studied him briefly, and vanished one by one. He couldn't see how they entered the blocks of stone, but he at least knew which corner. It was a start.
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The next time, he began his feeding at that corner. He gave the leader all of the bread at once. It stared at him, body expanding and contracting in quick breaths. When greed became too much, the rat tore into a large chunk of soaked bread and carried it into the tiniest of crevices at the base of a stone. The man smiled to himself.
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By his count, it took him a full week to dig around that stone with his fingernails. The rats watched him all the time, the leader of the rats studying him with a cocked head, sniffing, testing the air, waiting.
The man crouched against the stone and the fresh dirt whenever he heard the feeding-person walk down the tunnel. All the while, the far-away lantern was kept burning outside the far-away door. It helped him, made his work quicker. And he knew he had to hurry.
When a jagged section of the rock broke free, it served as a tool, and in another week he pried that first stone block out.
When two more stones were out, he felt he could squeeze his body through. He had lost weight--he was giving the leader and the other rats most of his food so they would scurry further into the opening. It was a trail he could follow in his digging. The packed clay behind the stone wall was almost as tough as the rock itself, but the rats knew the weakest spots to dig out for their cache, and for their escape tunnels. And his.
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He was digging gradually upwards, although it was difficult to tell in the contours of the narrow shaft. He was starving, all his food going to the leader. By his estimate he had not eaten in four days when he felt a sliver of fresh air caress him. He scraped his body into a different position and tried to relax, to collect his thoughts. He didn't know what to do. Something in his brain told him to go back, to scurry to the safety of his cage, to eat the food that would be there. When the leader of the rats boldly walked along his outstretched forearm, he made his decision.
The fattened rat's fur came apart easily in his hands, the meat warm and bloody. He heard the other rats slide away towards safety as he finished his meal. He licked the bones clean and tossed them down the shaft. A few yards later he saw a glimmer of light beckoning him closer.
The digging was too easy, the dirt falling loose in his hands. More strips of light hurt his eyes. A trap-door of some sort was above him, and faint noises came from beyond. The noises stopped as he pushed at the door.
He had to wedge his entire body against the door to move it. It was almost too heavy for his weakened muscles, the strain making him faint. It was the scent of fresh air and the memory of food that gave him the strength to shove the trap-door aside.
The light had fooled him--it became dark again in this place as he forced his body up and on to a dirt floor. He smelled odors from a forgotten past as he stumbled awkwardly for a few steps. He heard a quick release of breath and something moved not twenty paces from him. The new place was suddenly filled with a light that blinded him.
He heard hushing sounds, and wood being scraped against wood. He took his hand away from his eyes and let them adjust. A young girl with washed-out blond hair and sunken eyes was at an oil lantern above a plank table. The lantern was strung up by a twisted wire, slowly spinning, catching each face at the table in brief frames of light: the girl with the sad, sunken eyes, about 15 years old; a girl of seven or so, her hair in unraveling pigtails, the eyes already as haunted as her sister's; the old man in a torn flannel shirt as faded as the stone walls of the cabin they were in, his gaunt face just as washed out, a thin dribble of tobacco spit oozing between the broken stumps of his teeth.
"Well, took you long enough." muttered the old man. He nodded at an empty wooden chair by the table. "Go on, set."
The little girl clutched a doll, a stuffed rag bound with bits of string to make a head and stubby arms. There was no face on the doll. The girl stared at the man who had climbed through the trap door. "Daddy," she whispered, "is that the man who killed Mommy?"
"Shut up!" snapped the old man. "We don't talk bout that no more." The old man looked hard at the newcomer, then jerked his chin at the bowls the older girl was now bringing to the table. "We got some extra meat in the stew today."
The older girl was at the man's side, placing the last bowl on the table near him. She reached out tentatively, as if to touch his shoulder, and drew her hand back. "Because it's your birthday," she said.
The man sat, puzzled. He slurped at his food with the others. There was bread, and the older girl gave him a second piece. "Ain't got no cake," she added. There was a thin smile on her face.
"But we got you a present," said the little girl. Her hollow eyes came alive for the first time. She was waiting eagerly.
"Yep, we did," said the old man. There was a smile on his face too as he brought up a box and set it on the table. It was of medium size and wrapped in old newspapers. "Go on, open it."
The man felt something he hadn't known for many years. He rubbed at the small tears in his eyes and slowly tore the newspaper away.
It was a metal cage. A small saucepot with no handle had been bolted inside to make an exercise wheel. On the wheel, a small rat raced furiously, going nowhere.
They were all laughing at him now, even the older girl. The younger girl thumped her rag-doll against the table in glee, cackling. The old man coughed on his tobacco juice and pounded his chest with a fist. "Oh, that's rich!" he said.
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A short while later they watched him go down the trap door. "We'll see you next year, son," said the old man. "Give me a day or so to fill this one with cement, then you can start again. Just remember the rules."
"I'll make sure you get your food," said the older girl. She gave him a pleasant smile and waved.
"Make sure you give your pet a name," said the little girl. "It has to have a name."
The heavy trap door closed over him and he worked his way backward.
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The man had been in the cage a long time. Every day, or perhaps it was night, someone brought him food. He felt weak, so he ate it all, except at first, when he was still feeding his pet. He tried to handle it, but it bit him, so he stopped giving it food. And he never did name it.
After a while his eyes adjusted. There was a pale reflection of light coming from a distant door. For some reason, he knew he shouldn't try to escape that way. It had something to do with the food, he thought. He might not get any more.
It was when he had finished his meal that day that his pet began to race on the exercise wheel, faster and faster. The noise distracted him, so he reached inside the cage and threw the rat against a far wall. It shuddered once and was still. He slept then.
The slithering sounds woke him. He propped himself on an elbow and tried to see. As usual, it took a while. Then he could see very clearly.
A hundred red eyes were staring at him.
Hungry eyes...
and now, for nights when you just can't sleep, enter the...
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